| Don and Betty Draper in a re-imagined version of Roy Lichtenstein's In The Car (1963) by Jayne Tunnicliffe |
I am as seduced by it as many of you.
| Don and Betty Draper in a re-imagined version of Roy Lichtenstein's In The Car (1963) by Jayne Tunnicliffe |
In Part One of this post, I introduced the first five common mistakes I have encountered while evaluating student research essays. Listed below are the remaining five problem areas to avoid when completing written assignments for submission.
6. Failing to properly format a publication or work of art
This is a problem area that relates to some basic formatting rules that are often mixed up by students of different disciplinary backgrounds. The trick is to determine if the work is a "stand alone" work of art/literature or "part of a collection" work of art/literature.
7. Inserting images directly into the body of the essay
Avoid wherever possible inserting images, tables, charts, and graphs directly into a scholarly essay written for an arts and humanities based course. Place them instead at the end of the paper, after the bibliography, and wherever possible include the ARTIST/PRODUCER, TITLE, and DATE of the work along with the notation Figure 1, Figure 2 etc.. In the text, you can then refer to the image and its notation figure 1, figure 2, etc.. and readers will know to look for the images at the end of the essay. Also note that works of art DO NOT NEED TO BE LISTED in the bibliography as sources.
8. Referring to authors/artists by their first name
NEVER ever refer to an artist, author, filmmaker, or any kind of producer by their first name in a scholarly paper. For example, if you are talking about Andy Warhol, refer to him as Warhol and NOT Andy in the paper. This is a personal pet peeve of mine, especially since most students end up personalizing a woman’s names three times more often than a man’s. Marina Abramovic is Abramovic and NOT Marina, Kanye West is West and NOT Kanye, etc… The only exception to this rule is if the artist/producer does not have a last name or is a group, i.e. Cher, Banksy, Lady Gaga, Beatles.
9. Providing a boring or uninspired paper title
As I mentioned in a previous post about planning and outlining your research essay, the title of an essay is like the icing on the cake and sets the mood for your argument. A good title can also boost the level of interest in your topic and set your paper apart from a stack of boring titles. In other words, avoid the lethal error of titling your paper something like: “Andy Warhol’s Pop Art” or “A Research Paper about Dada.” Make an effort instead to align the title of your paper with your argument or specific topic, i.e. “Warhol and the Art of Mass Consumption: A Case Study of Marilyn Diptych (1964)” or “Dada as Anti-Art and the Influence of Marcel Duchamp.”
10. Not proof-reading the essay (more than once) before handing it in
Quite simply, this is the easiest and perhaps most important mistake to avoid. I routinely tell students that the most important final step before handing in their essay is to sit down and READ THE ESSAY OUT LOUD. This will help you identify lapses in grammar, run-on sentences, nonsensical passages, and mistakes in argument and logic. Better yet, have a friend read the essay aloud with you so that you can hear the mistakes coming out of someone else’s mouth. Editing is a critical step throughout the writing process, but most important at the final hand-in stage. Imagine your professor marking stacks of essays at the end of a long semester. Now imagine that they have to struggle to understand your argument, however fantastic it is. At this point in the game, clarity will almost always win out and translate to a higher mark than dense and impenetrable language or sloppy, error-filled writing.
Good Luck!
| Screen shot of a flash mob staged at a Los Angeles mall for the ABC comedy mockumentary Modern Family |
| A Kaprow Happening from the 1960's |
| Surf clothing advertised in the late 1960's using the concept of the "Happening" |
| Phone company T-Mobile sponsors flash mobs as part of its advertisement campaigns |